From 757bde4855d2fc0b497a98a638a6c25c2aeda4ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jaroslav Klech <jklech@redhat.com>
Date: Oct 14 2020 08:13:41 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Describes issue no.535


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diff --git a/modules/release-notes/pages/sysadmin/Storage.adoc b/modules/release-notes/pages/sysadmin/Storage.adoc
index 54bd7cf..edd86fd 100644
--- a/modules/release-notes/pages/sysadmin/Storage.adoc
+++ b/modules/release-notes/pages/sysadmin/Storage.adoc
@@ -3,3 +3,25 @@ include::{partialsdir}/entities.adoc[]
 
 [[sect-storage]]
 = Storage
+
+== Storage Instantiation Daemon is now enabled
+
+Storage Instantiation Daemon (SID) provides a system-level infrastructure for convenient handling of storage-device-related events through modules provided by other developers.
+
+The storage-related-events could be for example:
+
+* Identifying specific Linux storage devices and their dependencies
+* Collecting information and state tracking
+* Creating custom groups of enumerated devices
+
+The general theme running across benefits of this Fedora update is *centralization* of solutions that address storage issues with the `udev` device manager.
+
+This change brings the following benefits:
+
+* Central infrastructure for storage event processing
+* Improving recognition of the storage events and their sequences
+* Centralized solution for delayed actions on storage devices and groups of devices
+* Single notion of device readiness shared among various storage subsystems
+* Enhanced possibilities to store and retrieve storage-device-related records when compared to the `udev` database
+* Centralized solution for scheduling triggers with associated actions defined on groups of storage devices
+* Direct support for generic device grouping

From 8222813c6b92d7702e0ade6bdc5d14bd6fc70213 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jaroslav Klech <jklech@redhat.com>
Date: Oct 14 2020 09:54:17 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Applies SME feedback


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diff --git a/modules/release-notes/pages/sysadmin/Storage.adoc b/modules/release-notes/pages/sysadmin/Storage.adoc
index edd86fd..af2bd08 100644
--- a/modules/release-notes/pages/sysadmin/Storage.adoc
+++ b/modules/release-notes/pages/sysadmin/Storage.adoc
@@ -4,17 +4,19 @@ include::{partialsdir}/entities.adoc[]
 [[sect-storage]]
 = Storage
 
-== Storage Instantiation Daemon is now enabled
+== Storage Instantiation Daemon has been introduced
 
 Storage Instantiation Daemon (SID) provides a system-level infrastructure for convenient handling of storage-device-related events through modules provided by other developers.
 
-The storage-related-events could be for example:
+The reactions of SID to the `udev` device manager events could be for example:
 
 * Identifying specific Linux storage devices and their dependencies
 * Collecting information and state tracking
 * Creating custom groups of enumerated devices
 
-The general theme running across benefits of this Fedora update is *centralization* of solutions that address storage issues with the `udev` device manager.
+Fedora 33 introduces a package with SID. At first, this daemon will be disabled by default and will provide limited functionality. Further Fedora updates will enhance the SID functionality.
+
+The general theme running across benefits of this Fedora update is *centralization* of solutions that address storage issues with `udev`.
 
 This change brings the following benefits:
 

From a5c2dbe005ea7ce0ddb2061b39e4345da13c8c73 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jaroslav Klech <jklech@redhat.com>
Date: Oct 19 2020 07:13:21 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] fixup! Applies SME feedback


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diff --git a/modules/release-notes/pages/sysadmin/Storage.adoc b/modules/release-notes/pages/sysadmin/Storage.adoc
index af2bd08..c1e18fd 100644
--- a/modules/release-notes/pages/sysadmin/Storage.adoc
+++ b/modules/release-notes/pages/sysadmin/Storage.adoc
@@ -8,18 +8,14 @@ include::{partialsdir}/entities.adoc[]
 
 Storage Instantiation Daemon (SID) provides a system-level infrastructure for convenient handling of storage-device-related events through modules provided by other developers.
 
-The reactions of SID to the `udev` device manager events could be for example:
-
-* Identifying specific Linux storage devices and their dependencies
-* Collecting information and state tracking
-* Creating custom groups of enumerated devices
-
 Fedora 33 introduces a package with SID. At first, this daemon will be disabled by default and will provide limited functionality. Further Fedora updates will enhance the SID functionality.
 
 The general theme running across benefits of this Fedora update is *centralization* of solutions that address storage issues with `udev`.
 
 This change brings the following benefits:
 
+* Identifying specific Linux storage devices and their dependencies
+* Collecting information and state tracking
 * Central infrastructure for storage event processing
 * Improving recognition of the storage events and their sequences
 * Centralized solution for delayed actions on storage devices and groups of devices

