@amoloney I've edited the article primarily to remove the passive voice but also to reduce sentence length for readability. I also added a featured image.

I'm not completely happy with the image since the F43 images are not scalable to the default article image size of 1890x800 px. It ends up a bit "squat". Sorry about that.

If you have a few moments and wish to review the article, let me know of any changes that have to be made. It is scheduled and won't be editable by anyone but an editor.

Thank you @rlengland ! I have a bad habit of very long sentences, I thought you should know this for future things written by me as they will always need sentence editing ... :D

But really, thank you its very appreciated. FWIW the image looked fine to me. I've had another pass through the article as my caps was off for Beta/beta throughout it too, but I also need to update the links. They all either refer to f42 beta or the current release, and not f43 beta. Ill take care of that this morning and it should be good to go as scheduled then.

It's not a big deal, but I think "beta" should have an initial upper-case letter when it is used as part of the release name (i.e. "Fedora Linux 43 Beta"). But in all other contexts, it should be all lower-case (unless it is the first word of a sentence). It's not even worth correcting at this point. Just FYI for next time. Thanks. :smile: