#228 coreos-download: update stream descriptions
Merged 3 years ago by dustymabe. Opened 3 years ago by bgilbert.
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@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@

        stableReleaseJSONContainer = h("div", { class: "col-8" }, [stableHeading, stableReleaseVersion, stableJSON])

        stableHeadingContainer = h("div", { class: "row" }, [stableIconContainer, stableReleaseJSONContainer])

  

-       stableIntroText = h("p", { class: "pl-3 pr-2", style: { height: "9em" } }, "The Stable stream should be used by production clusters. Versions of Fedora CoreOS are battle-tested within the Testing and Next streams before being promoted.");

+       stableIntroText = h("p", { class: "pl-3 pr-2", style: { height: "9em" } }, "The Stable stream is the most reliable version of Fedora CoreOS. Releases are battle-tested within the Testing stream before being promoted.");

        stableReleaseLink = h('button',

          {

            class: "d-block mx-auto mb-4 py-1 px-3 btn btn-sm btn-fedora-blue",
@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@

        testingReleaseJSONContainer = h("div", { class: "col-8" }, [testingHeading, testingReleaseVersion, testingJSON])

        testingHeadingContainer = h("div", { class: "row" }, [testingIconContainer, testingReleaseJSONContainer])

  

-       testingIntroText = h("p", { class: "pl-3 pr-2", style: { height: "9em" } }, "The Testing stream consists of promoted Next releases. Mix a few Testing machines into your production clusters to catch any bugs specific to your hardware or configuration.");

+       testingIntroText = h("p", { class: "pl-3 pr-2", style: { height: "9em" } }, "The Testing stream contains the next Stable release. Mix a few Testing machines into your cluster to catch any bugs specific to your hardware or configuration.");

        testingReleaseLink = h('button',

          {

            class: "d-block mx-auto mb-4 py-1 px-3 btn btn-sm btn-fedora-green",
@@ -337,8 +337,7 @@

        nextReleaseJSONContainer = h("div", { class: "col-8" }, [nextHeading, nextReleaseVersion, nextJSON])

        nextHeadingContainer = h("div", { class: "row" }, [nextIconContainer, nextReleaseJSONContainer])

  

- 

-       nextIntroText = h("p", { class: "pl-3 pr-2", style: { height: "9em" } }, "The Next stream closely tracks current development work and is released frequently. The newest versions of the Linux kernel, Systemd, and other components will be available for testing.");

+       nextIntroText = h("p", { class: "pl-3 pr-2", style: { height: "9em" } }, "The Next stream represents the future. It provides early access to new features and to the next major version of Fedora. Run a few Next machines in your cluster, or in staging, to help find problems.");

        nextReleaseLink = h('button',

          {

            class: "d-block mx-auto mb-4 py-1 px-3 btn btn-sm btn-fedora-orange",

The current descriptions were taken from the CoreOS Container Linux releases page and don't match Fedora CoreOS.

Based loosely on https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-coreos/update-streams/#_individual_update_streams.

Apparently there's no way to inline images here, but https://i.imgur.com/XqEyci9.png

Apparently there's no way to inline images here

I've seen it done before.. I think there's a way.. For example: https://pagure.io/fedora-badges/issue/849#comment-760399

The Next stream represents the future. It provides early access to new
features and to the next major version of Fedora. Run a few Next machines
in your cluster, or in staging, to help find problems.

Optional.. I think this reads better if we switch the two things in the sentence:

The Next stream represents the future. It provides early access
to the next major version of Fedora and to new features. Run a few
Next machines in your cluster, or in staging, to help find problems.

Maybe we even call it new experimental features.

I've seen it done before.. I think there's a way.. For example: https://pagure.io/fedora-badges/issue/849#comment-760399

Doesn't work for PRs: https://pagure.io/pagure/issue/1273

Optional.. I think this reads better if we switch the two things in the sentence:

I thought about that, but IMO it reads better with the short item before the long one.

Pull-Request has been merged by dustymabe

3 years ago
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